09-22-2018, 07:16 PM
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[member=2342]charlotte[/member] Seeing that you previously stated in our plotting that Charlotte is not necessarily developed just yet, how about planning a bit of a backstory for her? Feel her out that way. See how those influences effected her to this day and how it changed her behavior.
[member=125]Quill[/member] Though Quill's a lighthearted and cocky character, he does seem to have a dark side to him. Explore that somehow. What was his motive to rescue that ferret recently or why did he decide to capture that poor soul? Did something material drive him? Power? Recognition? Or just the satisfaction of doing so?
[member=2217]EscapedReality[/member] I see you have documents for Essie's. What makes him so observant of the creatures around him? Is he scared? Interested? Jealous? What caused him to start taking these notes?
[member=2048]COSETTE[/member] Reading through your tags. It says your character has an accessory and plenty of scars. Does she have any stories to any of these perhaps?
[member=2342]charlotte[/member] Seeing that you previously stated in our plotting that Charlotte is not necessarily developed just yet, how about planning a bit of a backstory for her? Feel her out that way. See how those influences effected her to this day and how it changed her behavior.
[member=125]Quill[/member] Though Quill's a lighthearted and cocky character, he does seem to have a dark side to him. Explore that somehow. What was his motive to rescue that ferret recently or why did he decide to capture that poor soul? Did something material drive him? Power? Recognition? Or just the satisfaction of doing so?
[member=2217]EscapedReality[/member] I see you have documents for Essie's. What makes him so observant of the creatures around him? Is he scared? Interested? Jealous? What caused him to start taking these notes?
[member=2048]COSETTE[/member] Reading through your tags. It says your character has an accessory and plenty of scars. Does she have any stories to any of these perhaps?